I still feel very excited about this. I guess the best way to show which shots I like may be to simply include them as little pictures in the script. I really love what you've done. However, since this is a collaborative edit, and since you will be the one doing most of this sort of work, you certainly should make your own call on most of these. We can suggest, but I think you are the one with the final say on all such matters.

As for CGI in the battle scenes (where I personally think it would be most useful) when I finish the script I can some rough storyboard illustrations. They will probably not be great, but at least they'll give an idea of what I would envision.