my favourite line....So Far

Oola and the fat female dancer performs... Lapti Nek is much sleazier and fits the setting better IMO

Can we cut this please...

1.The Rancor KEEPERS have come into the cage and are examining their dead beast. One of them breaks down and weeps.

A herd of wild banthas treks across Tatooine's dunes.[d1]

[d1]Some don’t like the banthas but I think they’re fine.

2.agreed but it is the second shot or smaller looking herd that needs to be removed IMO

[d1]I don’t mind the Special Edition beak as much as others do, but I don’t mind if it is removed either.

3. Because the special edition tentacles move more realistically i suggest a combination of both especially for the establishing shot of the sarlac but for me i prefer no beak

Luke has hold on one of the rigging ropes from the mast. He gathers Leia in his other arm and kicks the trigger of the deck gun. The gun explodes into the deck as Luke and Leia swing out toward the skiff.

[d1]

[d1]Show more damage on Luke’s hand to better match when he’s on the X-wing.

4.For me it was always weird that he was holding his Light sabre as high as he could vertically in the air when his hand gets shot as there was nobody near him... I think they just wanted to show this as easily as possible.

5.Droid torture can go as you suggested but for me the main problem is the stupid tentacle that grabs C3PO in the corridor

I quite like ED-9v9 but if it gets cut I'm not bothered either.

LUKE: I'll meet you back at the fleet.[d1]

LEIA: (over comlink) Hurry. The Alliance should be assembled by now.

LUKE: I will.

[d1]Redundant.

LUKE[d1] : No, not yet. I have to do some…thinking.

[d1]This line would have to be dubbed.

6. This final line does work somewhat.. But better would be "I need to be alone for a while..."