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Ronster
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Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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19-Dec-2011, 6:37 AM

3rd Act Structure - ROTJ Low Fat *EDIT*

No Added Colours or preservatives

http://www.mediafire.com/?u2m3nkdcb6hazr4

I Like the Corusant Idea, and those mock ups are awesome! but is perhaps not needed

check the structure of the movie above this includes Darth Enders Take of Endor for which I agree wholeheartedly with his ideas, the rest is my Vision of how the sequence unfolds I chopped loads of stuff about and cannot be bothered to write a change list because it would take too long as the clip runs at 40mins so practically 1/3 the movie.

Essentially I tried to cut down the amount of plot at any one time as this is the main reason IMO what the final act suffers from most... Too much flitting about between DSII / ENDOR / Space battle and tried to get to the end of a plot in the shortest time possible.let me know your thoughts on the fix I have attempted.

Added Etherial Obi-wan Speaks to Vader (Not sure if this works Mithrandir)

Whilst also Luke not telling Leia she is his sister as it seemed better for Luke to protect her in her own ignorance as well as Leia being shot makes luke reveal her to Vader . Removed Hans Jelousy and other stupid shananigans.

I think it feels a bit darker than the original. Let me know what are your thoughts.