I will try to have my script done in the next few days. I know it might not seem like a lot of work changing an already existing script around, but I don't have a whole lot of free time, even with school out. When I get it done you can see what my current structure will be. As I said, it's only a draft anyway, so we can then debate more significant structural changes then. At this point I'm honestly working largely on existing footage, be it the official film or deleted scenes. I haven't really thought of adding too many entirely new things just yet, such as Coruscant, or even the commandos in action I keep talking about. We'll get there soon.
Aalenfae, I would love to see any and all ROTJ mockups, as they could give my script some more direction during these vague points we've suggested. I'm very excited to see them.