Mithrandir said:
I think that's a scene that could work and needs to be in. Though the "difference" (in order not-to give the "overused" feeling) should be in the music. We have to find some piece of score that is dark, but not dramatic nor menacing.
In ESB is like "look, he's cold as shit, he just kills everyone who doesn't deliver properly" + menacing music. It's just about showing how badass Vader is.
ROTJ, which by definition is more focused on Vader's persona, and by this it could comprehend "why" he's so badass, could be either:
a) He chokes jerjerrod with rage, because he feels between the hammer and the anvil, so we should use some "rage, hurried music". (ROTS coral music, when grievous lands in Utapau comes to mind).
b) He kills with disdain. More in "who's this shit to interpose betwee the emperor and me?"... like Yoda does to the Royal Guard in ROTS too.
Either A or B, I think that ROTJ scenes where Vader is really hard-edge Vader don't abound and we should use it, albeit making some detail (since it's a not very trascendental scene, music is a "detail" and not a really important component of the scene) different.
I could read your scripts for this couple of mounths, I have some time until april.
Greetings!
yes this....
what do you think of this for basic structure
New Bothan Escape Opening
Dagobah - Yoda Dies
Luke flies to Tatooine - goes through Beggars Canyon need a new cgi transition anyway so thought I would suggest beggars canyon as a fly through.
Corusant Riots (possibly later)
Meets Ben in His house / hut
Vader goes to DSII Deleted Scene talks to luke / lightsabre construction
Jabbas Palace
Lapti-nek Redone
Sail Barge and escape
**** This is where the problems start ****
Lukes Hand and where does Luke go if not to Dagobah? Promise to an Old Friend?
Just had an Idea that if Luke goes back to Dagobah to the Cave? but there is nothing there? He failed the test before... Is it to do with Fear? if he fears nothing then nothing is there..... Trying to make this structure you proposed work somehow....it is mysterious the cave anyway perhaps do not need to show anything apart from the fact he goes back to the cave leave it up to the viewer once again the abstract meaning of it.
thats the best I can do with the current propesed structure so far. So a decision needs to be made on wether or not you want to keep Dagobah >>> Tattooine or keep it as the films original.