logo Sign In

Post #554896

Author
Angel
Parent topic
Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
Link to post in topic
https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/554896/action/topic#554896
Date created
13-Dec-2011, 11:04 PM

A feedback on the clip:

I liked the removed cyan you did. Careful the magenta tones that skin takes (palpatine) :)

Explosions light effects Very well done as well the sound desing.

"Leave him or we will never make it" I like the wobling camera movement but i think more sharp shaking

Finaly a shakeless explosion! :D

The footage appears a bit contrasty making it lose detail in highlights and shadows.

Activate elevator... the walls are still blue, will you remove the hue from them?

The alarm sound already feels 70s. One suggestion is to have it be in specific times in the shots otherwise it sound way to repeated. I think Tantive alarm changes a few times.

The overhead shot with the two ships battling need more Green to the lasers. It still look cyan-y ;)

I m generaly not fan of the phantom menace music that used in these shots. If not a new music replacement is an option then ok.

Nice new voice on the alien! Nice new static(monitor noise) on the above monitor of him!

The shot of obi wan awakes is particular successful as background replacement!

Good you got rid the falling elevator when they fall into the door :)

The new droid voice is something i have to get use to but 100 times better from the old ones

Grievous walks over the ship still appears in the exterior scene. maybe you can cover it with a slow explosion as overlap.

The new Escape pod shot is maybe the highlight of this video! If you can make it a bit longer and trim some frames from the fancy previous shots then its perfect!

The lasers that hit the ship is a bit out of the ROTS aesthetic. I can take it as a temp effect

Some explosions are a bit akward but i can imagine is a matter of time so you can find better replacements!


-Angel