I agree with Harmy's brightness assessment. A good indicator that yours is too bright is simply that so much detail is lost in the blown out whites. If the detailts were meant to be blown out, they wouldn't be on the film in the first place. That's as close as we can get to a statement of intent from the cinematographer.
However, I'd say that BOTH screenshots are too cyan. If you're color-adjusting this scene, I'd cut that back quite a bit.