Good point. You are right, more human contact, better.
However I suggest that you put something in the middle of the Coruscant take off and this scene. It's too abrupt and fast for an hiperspace travel.
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Post #552911
- Author
- Mithrandir
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- Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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- Date created
- 28-Nov-2011, 1:42 PM