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Post #552370

Author
MrInsaneA
Parent topic
Idea: Integrating the two trilogies thread
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Date created
22-Nov-2011, 8:57 PM

darth_ender said:

I like it.  My concern is that the message might be confusing considering Anakin is mourning his mother at this moment.  I enjoy the music and the voiceover, but I'm not sure it fits perfectly with the scene itself.  Two thoughts come to mind: continue with this idea, but find ways to incorporate Qui-Gon voiceovers in at least one or two places prior to give the impression that he communicates often with him, or find a different scene to show Anakin regretting his attack on the Tuskens, maybe while confessing to Padme.  I'm not sure if that would work, but it's a thought.  Again, let me emphasize that I do like the music and the Neeson clip (from Batman Begins, yay!), but I simply feel it might work better elsewhere.  (I always worry my critique may be offensive; if you are pleased with how it turned out, don't listen to me of course)

 

Nonono, I asked for your thoughts sir. Be as blunt as you need to be.

I agree that there needs to be prior communication between Qui-Gon and Anikan. And I tried to put Qui-Gon's voiceover during his talk with Padme about killing the Tuskens, but no matter where I put it, it felt out of place to me.