logo Sign In

Post #552368

Author
darth_ender
Parent topic
Idea: Integrating the two trilogies thread
Link to post in topic
https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/552368/action/topic#552368
Date created
22-Nov-2011, 8:36 PM

I like it.  My concern is that the message might be confusing considering Anakin is mourning his mother at this moment.  I enjoy the music and the voiceover, but I'm not sure it fits perfectly with the scene itself.  Two thoughts come to mind: continue with this idea, but find ways to incorporate Qui-Gon voiceovers in at least one or two places prior to give the impression that he communicates often with him, or find a different scene to show Anakin regretting his attack on the Tuskens, maybe while confessing to Padme.  I'm not sure if that would work, but it's a thought.  Again, let me emphasize that I do like the music and the Neeson clip (from Batman Begins, yay!), but I simply feel it might work better elsewhere.  (I always worry my critique may be offensive; if you are pleased with how it turned out, don't listen to me of course)