I think that if you take this edit to the next level like adywan's kind of way, you commit to it and make radical changes that every star wars fan has always wanted, then you have something very special here. But you will truly need to commit to it and make incredibly radical changes. So far it looks good but you could do so much more.

I know you have just begun but just for you to know that you could make the definitive episode 3 here. This could be the version that every fan wants to have and the version they always dreamed of when they thought of how would episode 3 be like. I'm really looking forward to it and I wish you good luck. I hope you liked my word of motivation ;D

May the force be with you ;)

Sorry for bad english

I might continue to post suggestions later on