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Post #549229

Author
krloz
Parent topic
Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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Date created
29-Oct-2011, 11:59 PM

Impressive, most impressive.

Just a few suggestions:

Keep Vader's identity a secret. You could do this by letting anakin "burn till death" on mustafar so the audience thinks he really died. Later at the very end of the movie, we see a new apprentice (Darth Vader) so the audience thinks that palpy only used anakin to form his new empire and he didn't really care if he died because he had Vader under his sleeve.

Not naming luke nor leia and not give away where leia will end up. Just cut the line.

Make Sidious identity less obvious. Maybe put a shadow on his face and lowering his voice. This could also be use if you are planning on doing the other prequels(which would be cool if you do).

Maybe redubbing general griveous to be a more badass character and less coward (vader style maybe). And maybe mention that he really is Maul reconstructed as a cyborg so he could have a much more interesting backstory with ObiWan. It'll be awesome if you could make Griveous death more epic because the current one is kinda lame.

In general just try to make things match more with the OT please.

Oh an just wondering, are you working on HD?

Anyway sorry for bad english :)