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Post #549210

Author
greenpenguino
Parent topic
STAR WARS: The Oncoming Storm
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Date created
29-Oct-2011, 8:42 PM

Hey, earlier today I was working on this script. I've pretty much typed non-stop on this. Reviewing it, some of it needs work. Also, it's not finished yet. But I thought it would be an Idea to post it, just to get your guys thoughts.

I also heavily, and shamefully rip-off numerous things as I don't have an original bone in my body (well, not all of my body) for which I apologise. Some of the dialogue needs work, and some scenes need to be longer, but you should get the gist of where I'm getting at. Most of the terrible dialogue and stupidity you can chalk up to lack of sleep and a particularly nasty headache.

Enjoy! (or don't...)

EDIT: Having problems uploading script. I'll see if I can upload it as a PDF somewhere...

EDIT: Sorted! http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZENHWZHS