^ Some great ideas in there. I especially like that you seem to be keeping your characters under grave threat at nearly all times. Best to avoid big blocks where nobody is facing an immediate possibility of great harm and or failure. The protagonists are there to be profoundly worried as much as possible :)
Post #547555
- Author
- thejediknighthusezni
- Parent topic
- EatonB's Star Wars Prequel Trilogy Re-Write
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/547555/action/topic#547555
- Date created
- 21-Oct-2011, 3:46 AM