All right then, I'll re-work them once more, trying to fix any errors that are still there... hyphens, quotation marks and the new starfield. And while we're at "See Threepio", isn't the "O" in "C3PO" supposed to be a "0" (zero)? I've copy/pasted the credits from that BlueHarvest-site I've linked to above, and it already had a lot of typos, so this might be one of the more difficult to tell ones.
In case you didn't notice, I've added a slight twinkle to the starfield... is that working? Or ist it too much? The original starfields twinkled slightly because of exposure differences, I think...
As for the fonts, yeah, I've used Century Gothic for the Dolby logo's texts, so thanks for the correct one, I'll change it :-) Also I guess I'll just rebuild the "DOLBY SYSTEM" line with something like Eurostile, as I just took a Google image for that. Regarding the MPAA-font... no idea... it's way too small to tell. I think I'll try a font that's closer to this: