TServo2049 said:

Laserschwert, these look great. However, to help you make them look as accurate as possible, I'm going to compare your recreation against the real ones and look for errors.

Right now, I see that you put commas after the companies listed for Additional Optical Effects - this is inaccurate, none of them had commas in the original.

Good catch! I've corrected those. And thanks for checking... there shouldn't be too many other errors (hopefully!), as I've basically traced the original credits. But it can't hurt to get another pair of eyes look over them :-)

And about the starfield: It looks great, except the blacks are a bit noisy. I've removed the noise and will add a little touch of moving noise back in via After Effects, so that it's not static.