I'm really sorry to say, but there is a little Tippteufel in the ESB crawl:
The title says 'Das Imperium schlägt züruck'. I assume this wasn't in the original crawl? I'm asking because the original release of episode II for example had the title 'Angrief der Klonkrieger' printed on the DVD-cover.
Anyway, these are nice crawls. What videocodec did you use for this?