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Post #544006

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The Concierge
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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Date created
6-Oct-2011, 1:39 PM

Hey guys. Sorry, this is a little outta the blue, and....terribly specific... but I thought of an interesting bit related to the whole Maul=Grievous idea. Basically, it's a bit of dialogue that takes place after their duel. It's Maul-grievous's final death rattle. Something to the effect of:

"Again you have defeated me, Kenobi. But I am slain with the knowledge that the Jedi are destroyed"

Something like this would give Obi (and the audience?) an extra shock and perhaps propel the story forward a little faster, having the conspiracy start to reveal itself to him a bit earlier. Also, it gives Maul a little bit of personal revenge and twisted closure....

Doable? Worth it? Waste of time?