Spence, just a random thought about the 'new power source'. Make sure you keep it as one of those MacGuffins that the film snobs are always talking about. The characters need to care about the power source, but the audience needs to care about the characters.
Post #542859
- Author
- Sluggo
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- The Phantom Menace - Spence Edit
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- Date created
- 2-Oct-2011, 12:43 AM