Fonts used: Franklin Gothic Demi and UniversLTStd UltraCn

Close enough for me. But I really wish I could recreate the effect on the letter's edges.

Your SW crawl starts a little bit too late (the first line should start at 00:35) and it runs too fast (the third paragraph should start at 01:17).
But it looks great so far, except the Logo itself, I like the one from Empire and Jedi better (It's also the SE Logo, the original looked a litte bit different).

But "correcting" the "ZURÜCK" would go a little bit too far for me ;-).