I do quite like the opening if I can get the pacing better. It puts a face on the Federation and our protagonists, and it has the Jedi ending fools. It can be a good opening if the pacing is picked up.
Post #533710
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- SpenceEdit
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- The Phantom Menace - Spence Edit
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- 8-Sep-2011, 4:39 PM