Why not cut it further to make this great threat a bit more anonymous (Luke, Yoda, Ben's ghost, the Other).

As a fan edit proposal it could even be the opening scene in the film setting up the whole 'search for Skywalker' plot stream though it would create the need for a new crawl and a new opening shot it would result in an un-interrupted Asteroid sequence.

I mention it here safe in the prejudgment that Adywan would never do such thing but it might interest someone.

VADER: What is thy bidding, my master?

EMPEROR: There is a great disturbance in the Force.

VADER: I have felt it.

EMPEROR: We have a new enemy.

VADER: Yes, my master.

EMPEROR: The Force is strong with him.

He could destroy us.

VADER: If he could be turned, he would become a powerful ally.

EMPEROR: Yes…yes…he would be a great asset. Can it be done?

VADER: He will join us or die, master.