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Post #531694

Author
rpvee
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
5-Sep-2011, 12:15 AM

Except "that" wouldn't make sense.  Saying "that no longer" would mean her death no longer has any meaning for him, but he would have JUST found out about it.  "She" fits better.