xhonzi said:

Pennsylvania Jones said:

xhonzi said:

Just an observation from someone who's spent a lot of time thinking about stories and how to write them- Story is not just a sequence of things happening. It's about something. Figure out what your story is about, then use scenes to build that something.

I know that. I've known that for years. I said in the post that this was only the first part of the story.

Apologies.

Apology accepted. I think I'm going to give up on seeking help from here, though. Now if only Thorn Valley forums would just activate my blasted account!