About 17 minutes in so far. Some notes:

1. Music during approach to Coruscant ends too abruptly.

2. Audio seems slightly off sync. Probably just the mp4.

3. Music during 3P0 and R2's argument during the desert feels out of place and ends too soon.

4. Music during the Jawa's first scene feels VERY out of place, like they're some crazy tribe instead of some desert merchants.

5. We see the big ominous tube lower over R2, but we never see what it does.

Those are my only criticisms thus far. Otherwise I'm very interested in where this concept is going.