That is a rather concise and effective crawl... However instead of "have went to," it should be "have gone to." If you put that in an edit though, some of the words would be need to be capitalized; "Imperial" and "Rebellion" seem to be possible candidates.
Post #526124
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- The Aluminum Falcon
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- Info & Ideas: ESB and ROTJ Wishlist
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/526124/action/topic#526124
- Date created
- 22-Aug-2011, 11:43 PM