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Post #525804

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ray_afraid
Parent topic
The ANH:SE Redux Ideas thread (Radical Ideas Welcome).
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Date created
22-Aug-2011, 9:56 AM

Jaitea said:

Still mucking

J

I love the top pic! The second one, not as much. (I'll refer to it's updated version you recently posted and I hope this comes off as constructive, which is how it's intended.) The left of the shot looks to empty and it throws the weight of the shot off. Also, the two domed buildings look too copy/pasted- I like what you had going in the earlier version better. But most of all, to me, it looks like Luke is driving his car towards the group of buildings on the right as if he intends on ramming into them. With all the space to the left, it seems he would be driving over there. Maybe it doesn't look that way in motion?

Great job on the coloring! The color of the sand is great. The ground looks much more natural also.