adywan said:
New clip:
I like the new 3d Xwing
I dont like the blury black patch at the bottom right on dagobah . It might need slight more texture.
Very grand and impressive establishing shot. Some more distant traficking would be ideal but thats me.
I love that the sky finaly has continuity in the CG flyby shots. never got why they changed a sky so much after passing through the building
I like the new sky/BG replacement in the corridor but i think due the exposure of the shot the sky should be less visible to its original colors and be more white. Only to that shot because its daylight.
It might be a test but when the heroes are passing the circle window there is a black patch on a building.
Also when we cut in the close up of chewie the buildings are different. Again it might be an unfinished shot
Very awesome work on the opening the elevator shot. I like the new reflections on the glass
But there are the main problem. The edges. Even in this quality something is wrong with the edges are blury comparing with the rest of the shot.
I know you did your best to reconstruct the details because of the original blown up whites on the buildings but the edges when the building ends and the sky starts are blury.
Remember that all the edges on the film have that small halo (similar to the heavy one on TMP) that adds that film look. Or when the film burns from some effects like over exposure etc.
*old mockup dont mind. Focus on the edges and how they blend with the rest of the edges.*
In the shot of vader disarms han the building in the newly opened shot is very blury as well when the stormtroopers are comming. Nice to have DOF but almost all the distant buildings were just hazed never blured.
I like the new laser bolts
I hope that helps as feedback.
-Angel