TV's Frink said:

You might want to introduce this stuff in the scriptwriting forum.

Oh and the reason I posted here instead of the scriptwriting forum is just because I haven't attempted to write a script, or even a really original story. I've just tried to edit the existing material into a better story. (Though there are a few parts where I had to try to find additional bits to make it flow). But most of the notations I have made relate to how the existing material could be edited to tell that story, from a fan editing point of view, so I just felt this forum was more appropriate.