Nice mockup coinilius. I'm not really sure, but at some point, I think Anakin says "Hey wait" or something like that during the movie. Maybe you could put that into the scene as he follows Qui-Gon after he breaks up the fight.
Maybe I missed it, but why the change in Anakin's introduction? What's wrong with the one as it is (yippies and Jar Jar's antics aside)?
And why so keen on introducing Anakin in a fight scene? TPM Anakin is the only true "good" Anakin we get. He's a brat in AOTC and serial killer in ROTS. I'd like to think that at least at *some* point Anakin was a good guy :p