In the novel, the Death Star begins to rotate in order to take out Endor after the shield generator was destroyed. This isn't so radical, but it could capture the tension you mention. Also, if more capital ships are destroyed and the fleet in greater apparent jeopardy because of the Death Star and star destroyers, this might better capture the tension without the film having to be too dramatically altered.
Post #520124
- Author
- darth_ender
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- Info & Ideas: ESB and ROTJ Wishlist
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/520124/action/topic#520124
- Date created
- 5-Aug-2011, 9:05 PM