OK had to chime in late, but better late than never. There was the this video you posted a bit ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAEJF3rKdQU
I love the way this clip worked out, but i think it needs one last jab of funny right at the end. So why not have Anakins mouth move and sub in a wookie growl right before the end. Then finish with Mace with his hand on his chin.