Erik's corrections are very good. I might recommend, for ESB, saying "Return to a galaxy far, far away...", to match the iconic phrase, but that's just a judgement call.
Post #518867
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- Puggo - Jar Jar's Yoda
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- Harmy's STAR WARS Despecialized Edition HD - V2.7 - MKV (Released)
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- 2-Aug-2011, 8:13 PM