Originally posted by: Obi-Wan Spicoli
Rikter,
Nice job on those covers. They look great. But I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism - I'm assuming that you wrote the summaries. You spelled "Millennium" wrong on all of the covers. Two n's, not one. Also, when using the word "it" as a possessive, there is no apostrophe, ie "its" not "it's."
On the Star Wars cover there's no such word as "amist." I think you meant "amidst."
On the Jedi cover you spelled "attack" wrong. It also appears you have used the word "long" instead of "along."
No offense intended. Like I said, this is nice work, and I may like to use it. I just always notice grammatical errors, and these stick out. Not that my grammar is always perfect, of course.
Scott
Rikter,
Nice job on those covers. They look great. But I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism - I'm assuming that you wrote the summaries. You spelled "Millennium" wrong on all of the covers. Two n's, not one. Also, when using the word "it" as a possessive, there is no apostrophe, ie "its" not "it's."
On the Star Wars cover there's no such word as "amist." I think you meant "amidst."
On the Jedi cover you spelled "attack" wrong. It also appears you have used the word "long" instead of "along."
No offense intended. Like I said, this is nice work, and I may like to use it. I just always notice grammatical errors, and these stick out. Not that my grammar is always perfect, of course.
Scott
Scott if your down to fix the text and email it to me - I still have the PSD's - I in turn will send you the correct cover + ALL the cover that I have on a CD
Rikter