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Post #51804

Author
Obi-Wan Spicoli
Parent topic
Star Wars DVD Covers
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Date created
1-Jun-2004, 8:12 PM
Rikter,

Nice job on those covers. They look great. But I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism - I'm assuming that you wrote the summaries. You spelled "Millennium" wrong on all of the covers. Two n's, not one. Also, when using the word "it" as a possessive, there is no apostrophe, ie "its" not "it's."

On the Star Wars cover there's no such word as "amist." I think you meant "amidst."

On the Jedi cover you spelled "attack" wrong. It also appears you have used the word "long" instead of "along."

No offense intended. Like I said, this is nice work, and I may like to use it. I just always notice grammatical errors, and these stick out. Not that my grammar is always perfect, of course.

Scott