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Post #512047

Author
L8wrtr
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Episode II: The Republic Divided - by L8wrtr (Released)
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Date created
6-Jul-2011, 6:40 PM

Ahhhh.. yes.

First no worries, I just couldn't tell what your complaint about Jango was, so I didn't know if I had addressed it :)

I have the same complaints about the Jango subplot, but unfortunately there is no way that I can see which negates this serious gap. No matter how you look at it, a clone army ordered by a dead Jedi Master in secret, based on a Bounty Hunter obviously hired to assassinate a leading Senator is a huge red flag. There simply isn't enough footage resolve the gaping problem (IMO). For me I chalk it up to logic fails that plague even the OT, such flying directly to the Rebel Base after escaping the Death Star while knowing that Falcon has a homing beacon somewhere on board. Wait, wut?

My strategy was simply improve his scenes as best as possible.