Jacobss said:
I would remove everything about Obi-Wan. We see just Padme getting onboard and starting.
+1
Yes I got what you mean - and don't worry, everything that could be improve with the music will be...more tension, more emotion.
I'm working right now on something I've always wanted : Obi-wan and Anakin's theme (or Master and Apprentice)...a friendship theme.
it is impossible to really increase the feeling of friendship between the two Jedi by just working the cut. Only the music can do that, a new leitmotiv.
if I can reach exactly what I want, this new theme will appear in AOTC and ROTS. It will support some dialogues between them and bring more emotion.