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Post #510538

Author
Mithrandir
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
29-Jun-2011, 2:04 PM

The Cutter said:

The Cutter said:

  

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

 

 

what do u think about this ?

 I agree with you, it's something that should be said at the beginning. I don't feel comfortable with the answer "I agree". That's why I thought of this dialogue...

Obi-wan : "Anakin, do you copy? The chancellor signal is coming from right there"

Anakin : "I'm glad that you chose to serve, master (but) Don't worry (and)Take a deep breath."

Obi-wan : "I knew you would say something like that " (if possible, if not, we'd have to figure out something else).

little pause

Anakin : "Obi-wan... may the force be with you" [with us would be even better]

Obi-wan : "thank you brother, may the force be with you"

 

I have put "..." between "ObiWan" and "may the force be with you" in the last Anakin's line because, the way I'm immagining it, it implies Anakin cutting the joking and speaking seriously. This could be even boosted more with some minimal change in the score (if you decided to put the dialogue during the flyby and not at the very beginning of the movie.