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Post #510516

Author
Loconut
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
29-Jun-2011, 12:46 PM

The Cutter said:

The Cutter said:

 

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

 

 

what do u think about this ?

In my opinion both in the beginning or end would work:

Beginning: Glad he shows the effort of participating.

End: Appreciation because of the good battle he fought.