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Post #510328

Author
The Cutter
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
28-Jun-2011, 3:00 PM

Mithrandir said:

The dialogue still isn't buying me. Might it be better

 

P: You're sooner than I expected!

W: I know who you are, I know what you are... (turn on sabre) The senate will decide your fate.

P: I am the Senate

W: Not yet (or maybe here, turn on sabre)

P: It's treason then.

 Please Gandalf !  I already explained it once : impossible to put " I know who you are...." in another place