Much better! Still needs a little more pause before "It's treason then". And as stated earlier, at the beginning, Windu appears out of nowhere.
Post #510325
- Author
- rpvee
- Parent topic
- Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/510325/action/topic#510325
- Date created
- 28-Jun-2011, 2:45 PM