Asteroid-Man said:
There are little bits of ROTJ that made it not as good as it could have been. It had the potential to be the best Star Wars film but failed. How would you have done it?
Here's my take:
If Endor's moon was actually a moon of Coruscant and if it was actually Kashykk, I would have loved to see Han and Chewie leading an assault on Endor and then Luke and Leia leading a battle on Coruscant, and then Luke fights his way to the Emperor's office on Coruscant in the old Republic Building, now Emperial Palace and Vader is awaiting Luke in the office. Vader then takes Luke with him to the Death Star Orbitting Coruscant. On Kashyyk, Chewie and Han free Wookie slaves to use them as help to take out the Death Star Shield. The Death Star dogfight is lead by Lando. Han has to manually detonate the charges in the shield room on Kashyyk because the remote fails to work and he is hurt by the blast. The Vader Vs. Luke battle should have a faster paced score and then it becomes slow and Dark when the Emperor intervenes. Death Star scene continues until Vader's death. Vader disappears from the suit and there is a funeral pyre on Coruscant. Luke and Leia go to Kashyyk where Han is dying. As they (Lando, Luke, Leia and Chewie) are standing around him, a last speech is given from one of them or Luke, Leia and Han. Han dies as the camera pulls back to reveal the force ghosts watching over. Camera pulls up to show the sky turn to daylight. Fireworks go off. In the morning, we see a montage of celebrations around the Galaxy, and then we get a scene where Luke is in the old Council room (partly damaged and lit only by the window) with the force ghosts sitting in their seats as they have their last words with Luke. Roll Credits.
O.K---right off the bat and as I already mentioned-I personally would not change a thing in ROTJ.
And I know it is easy to nitpick someone-else's idea.
And whilst I don't have a problem with the content of the above alternative script, I do have a problem with how it would have been executed with the cinematic tools of the late 70's/early 80's.
Corruscant as we know it(The presentation as shown from 1999-2005) would not have been feasable with the technology of 1981-82.
Corruscant would have to have been rendered as an eloborate minature.
But it would have been lifeless(I.E not many flying vehicles ect ect---and therefore reducing it's sense of scale and size)
You also have to remember that Blade Runner debuted barely a year before.
Too many fans in 83' would have thought that Star Wars was ripping off Blade Runner( I actually thought Corruscant in 99' ripped of Blade Runner!)
And any "Wookie battle" would have been like a crass combination of the holiday special meeting Planet Of The Apes.
It barely works in 2005 with the battle on Kashyyk.
I highlighted it elsewhere---too many fans are trying to re-interpret ROTJ ,having been exposed to 20+ years of CGI infested movies (Matrix.Lord Of The Ring ect) that have come into play since ROTJ debuted in theaters.
As for Han being killed off---well it is extremly subjective....but put it this way.
Had Lucas and Kurtz never met ---who would been more successful on an individual basis---I don't know about you but I would wager Lucas would have had greater success.
And there is a reason for it.
Lucas knew exactly how much resonance(character depth) and tonality(suspense,horror,drama) to infuse in his films.If you lose the balance between these separate elements ,the quality of the movie diminishes.
Empire's secret is that it could afford to be dark and downbeat because there was still(at that point in time -circa 1980-81)an asyet untold conclusion to the story-to be resolved by ROTJ.Empire is effectively a link in the chain (and a vital one at that) but nothing more than a link.
In other words Empire's power would fail if there was no conclusive 3rd act to follow it.
Prior to ROTJ coming out---- the anticipation of the fans(from my own personal recollection) to see the Empire get it's ass well and truly kicked(after 2 films in which it practically dominated proceedings) was sky high.
Lucas understood this and that is why ROTJ is the way it is.
I saw Jedi in 83 ,aged 9 and none of the kids aspired for a wookie battle or for Han to have been killed.