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24-Jun-2011, 3:15 PM

You've got 'second rendevouz' twice.  The 93 one should be 'third'.

Since the 96 Cinefex quote is so on target, do you want to spoil it by having your explanation before people read his words?

There are several 'next rendevouz' maybe instead of "The next rendevouz is 2004" shorten it to:

  • Rendevouz 2004, xyz

 

The bullet point also adds a visual clue when a new one starts.  (can add in page html links if you want to get fancy)