DuracellEnergizer said:
I kinda liked "Soup's On". :shrug:
There may be an interesting character in there or an interesting story, but it was too much work trying to pick the story out of her style. Maybe it's her attempt to make the reader not realize they may be the victim or feel some sort of suspense.
Whatever it is, to me it's the written equivalent of two-image-a-second editing or shaky-cam films. It's work - and I won't do that to experience a story. I'm the customer.