I'm going to go ahead and read this and give you some feedback. The only reason I haven't done this yet, could be the same reason some others haven't, and that's just that as soon as I saw Gungans, Naboo, etc. I stopped reading. I think most people on these boards cringe like I do when they see PT names. If your story goes off on its own direction, I strongly suggest you just use new names. I'll get back to you with feedback after I read this. I can see you've really put a lot of work into this. Thanks for posting.