Post #503721

Author: Erikstormtrooper
Parent topic: Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/503721/action/topic#503721
Date created: 3-Jun-2011, 10:18 AM

I agree with Loconut. There needs to be more pause between "she" ad "no".

Could you use "your wife" like this:

- Vader rises.

- Palpatine: "your wife..."

- Shot of Vader turning to face him.

- Palpatine: "I'm afraid in your anger, you killed her."