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Post #503173

Author
Mithrandir
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
31-May-2011, 7:26 PM

Love what you achieved here cutter. Though just to be nitpicking, a few suggestions to make it even better:

Change "it" for "she" or "that" (if possible, though someone pointed out you might have done it on purpose).

When Vader says that he now knows the power of the DS the camera starts to shake, though... it cuts too fast to the things blowing up. Keep the shaking a little bit more just to make it feel not so abrupt. (you could add a persuasive "yeeeeeeesss" of palpatine here).

Nothing to say about music, it's amazing. Infact, it's amazing to have an actual composer as a fan editor :)

 

Congrats