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This one?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdDLmsqZZoc
Just a few minor changes.
This is getting out of hand...
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There's a presumably forthcoming edited version coming up.
This one?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdDLmsqZZoc
Just a few minor changes.
Were you not gonna post it if I hadn't said that? Haha. ;)
Oh, hai Frink! Kinda been avoiding this thread cos I can't resist clicking your links. (Don't want too many spoilers before it's ready). Today I caved and watched half a dozen or so. Now, the problem is I've just finished downloading L8wrtr's edit, and I can't watch it without expecting ridiculous things to happen. And they don't :(
doubleKO said:
(Don't want too many spoilers before it's ready)
And I[as someone who has been watching all the videos]'ve been wondering how many surprises there'll be once it's all finished, considering we have so many videos to look at, mostly in sequence.
2KO I hope you downloaded the DL DVD version, the ending is way better!
Ripplin said:
doubleKO said:
(Don't want too many spoilers before it's ready)
And I[as someone who has been watching all the videos]'ve been wondering how many surprises there'll be once it's all finished, considering we have so many videos to look at, mostly in sequence.
Fair enough. No complaints. ;)
RedFive said:
2KO I hope you downloaded the DL DVD version, the ending is way better!
Bugger. Got the mp4. Oh well, what's another 9GB eh? FE.org here I come!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Za7pdqKu_BI
I'm not sure why, maybe it's a case of writer's block, but this was a real struggle. And I'm not terribly happy with it, so any suggestions for improvement will be appreciated.
I'm guessing the writer's block really kicked in with the Amidala/Qui-Gonn exchange, as it's unaltered...right? :p Otherwise, I dug it.
Hmm...
How about Qui-gon walks up to amidala and asks for the 'J type nubian whatever' hyperdrive-generator and repeatedly says your highness??
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Yes, he's still looking for parts, then his response to her should be "No more orders from her highness today"
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Ripplin said:
I'm guessing the writer's block really kicked in with the Amidala/Qui-Gonn exchange, as it's unaltered...right?
Correct.
*sigh*
I've been watching Pagz edit and he had the market salesman (that Jar-Jar grabs the frog thing from with his tongue) tell him they aren't edible and that leads to Sebulba eating it anyway.
It might be fun if in your edit he warns Jar-Jar they are action figures and a choking risk.
Sebulba could cough after eating it and Jabba could be similarly be effected during the podrace.
Love it.Bingowings said:
It might be fun if in your edit he warns Jar-Jar they are action figures and a choking risk.
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greenpenguino said:
and repeatedly says your highness??
Maybe, as long as it's not the same type of repetition game that Amidala and Palpy have going. (I guess she'd be walking, not saying anything, so that would work) It would be funny to have him mention the parts for the J-type Nubian once in a while, well after he got them.
doubleofive said:
Love it.Bingowings said:
It might be fun if in your edit he warns Jar-Jar they are action figures and a choking risk.
Sorry, not feeling it. And I like how that scene plays right now as is.
Ripplin said:
greenpenguino said:
and repeatedly says your highness??
Maybe, as long as it's not the same type of repetition game that Amidala and Palpy have going. (I guess she'd be walking, not saying anything, so that would work) It would be funny to have him mention the parts for the J-type Nubian once in a while, well after he got them.
Agreed, I don't want to overuse the highness bit.
Maybe I can make him say that he now has the parts or something.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2r1iiJHEcz0
Don't think I'm done with this, but I think it's an improvement.
Isn't that the ending song? And I'm not sure the "iPod" thing works...
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It is the ending song indeed. The idea was that they were playing it as a tribute to Qui-Gon after the funeral. Of course, I could put *any* song on Qui-Gon's ipod if someone has a better suggestion.
What about it doesn't work? It's been suggested I need to make the "I" a little more separated from the "pod," but something else?
No, those were my thoughts.TV's Frink said:
What about it doesn't work? It's been suggested I need to make the "I" a little more separated from the "pod," but something else?
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