I think it works vey ver well, though it's very loud, it almost masks ObiWan. But as far as music concerns, it's 10/10, and don't know why, I'm not surprised, considering all you've done to audio in your edit ;)

Don't know how far you intend to go visually with it, but if you want, you could always remove that silly 21st century colorful oval hologram and put some old fashion 1970s buttons xD.

No, but seriously, congratulations. And it's always nice to see both ROTS edits are moving, Bob's and yours.