I'm seeing the same strobing/smearing (looks like fingerprints, actually) in both VLC and Windows Media Player (right click for largeness):

Weird that the problem pops up here but is absent at Ady's end.

At any rate, the crawl looks really good... "sharp and clean" as Captain Antilles put it. But I also agree with Harmy that the fade at the top of the crawl might be better if it were more gradual (e.g., if you look at my last screen cap, I'm not sure that we should still be seeing "THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK" text up at the top by that point). I'm not sure, though... maybe a more pronounced fade wouldn't look good. I guess I'd have to see it before forming an opinion.

Lastly, should the text completely disappear earlier than it does? Around the 1:28 to 1:30 mark, I was expecting the text to disappear but it lingered a bit longer than I think I'm used to. Maybe I'm just used to seeing certain things at particular moments according to the music.